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    I am now 2 weeks in to my video editing journey, this is ny latest video. Would appreciate some feed back on how i can improve the next one
    https://youtu.be/OqIePxFBz8A

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    Overall style is nice. Laid back attitude, clear vocals relaxing background music. I'm of opinion that the subscribe button duration was a bit long and perhaps you might want to change the mouse pointer to a hand and do a click animation on the subscribe button as well.
    Lastly I would personally opt to only include the subscribe button once in the video at the end or twice, once at the end and once when you are referring to subscribing.

    For the better part of the video you're talking about Canva which is in a way an awesome tool and I absolutely recommend it to anyone for the same reasons as you point out but it didn't meet my expectations that where set at the start of the video. If I wanted to hear so much about Canva (I must admit I skipped after a while) I would've looked for a Canva specific video instead.

    Other than that I've got nothing to comment on for now.
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    Great feedback as usual Grapes 👍 i will most certainly take it on board. Suppose it may only be super interesting for people that dont know about canva or struggle to make a professional logo

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    Yes but still in that case it's probably good for your own content as well to spread it out into this video where you mention it briefly and then you can refer to a new video where you go more in depth that way you have more video's and you also keep them bite sized.
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    As someone who's advice i can trust can you check my new video? I know the background music is too loud. But i think the rest is getting there slowly https://youtu.be/h0UBWj6M3vY

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    Hey Darren,

    I really like it. Now I did skip through a bit so I might have missed something but the bits I did see where very clear. Great job on the cards with the keypoints. In some occasions I thought they where a bit long in view which makes it feel a bit static.

    I think for the next one the card length and card design might actually be best to work on. Now I'm not great with typography and graphic design so I can't go too far into detail (also its quite subjective I guess). What I would do is find either a more modern font or something that's more in line with the game's design like something pixel art like. In any case I would stay well away from any font with serifs. Another thing that I wouldn't do is the drop shadow. Drop shadow is better left alone unless it really serves a purpose (it can improve readability when you don't have a solid or semi solid background behind the text). Lastly I noticed the text wasn't always centred to the textbox you placed behind it. (Maybe you should use something like Canva to help you style the cards )

    I think if you do those points for the next vid it should make quite a big improvement and we'll see if there's anything left to pick at
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