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    Default Check out my Trip to the pearl of the indian ocean

    The Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pZma8M2zJEY

    Check out my two day stay video at the Shangri La's Hambantota Resort in Sri Lanka.
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    Heres the link again: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pZma8M2zJEY

    Let me know what you think about the video

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    One or two of the shots are very nice, but too many are too wobbly for comfort. The video fails to live up to the expectations of the title. It's just shots of a comfortable hotel - which could be anywhere. Try to show something that's Sri Lanka (or whatever country you're visiting) rather than generic "tropical island hotel".
    Also try to mix some live audio - this can really add to the sense of being there. Just music simply makes the video more bland.
    Tim

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    Yes - live audio makes a huge difference - even if it's mixed 50-50 with the musack

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    Agreed with previous answers. A good voice-over and/or spoken pieces to camera telling us where you are etc. would make a 100% improvement. Let's see your next effort PLEASE.
    Cheers. Wynn.
    Last edited by Wynn Stedders; 09-11-2017 at 01:29 PM.

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    looks like you had fun
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