For a first Video, i was impressed.
I liked some of the camera shots.
But - far too long, as others said, re edit it and make it 50% shorter,this will then speed up the action and make it far more watchable.
Some of the edits were quick and good, but most were far to long, you could have cut half way through a scene and the watcher would still know whats going on.
Would be really good if you could re edit it and then post up the new version
All in all great 1st Video
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