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    Hello,
    This is my first short film.
    Everything I learned was alone so I know its not perfect and i still need to learn a lot.
    But there it is.

    https://youtu.be/OSsQDqykpSM

    Enviado do meu HUAWEI MT7-L09 através de Tapatalk

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    It looked good and well thought out. Didn't have a clue what it was about though. Either I'm being dense (likely) or you didn't give enough signposts as to what was going on (possible).
    Tim

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    You have a technical talent with the camera and editing but you need to focus more on the storyline. I would have liked the ambient sounds higher in the audio mix. This shows given the right story you could make a good piece.

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    Camera work was great

    It held my interest until the end

    I dont know what it was about, but that's ok

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    RUN — Short Film

    Yep !
    'No longer are the pleasures of Home Movie Making limited to those with ample funds. Now the man and woman of moderate means can join the sport'..... Kodak catalogue 1933

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    Thanks everyone for the advices.
    I agree with all.. i need practice more the storyline
    Last edited by miguel.machado.1; 03-19-2016 at 03:14 PM.

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