i watched it but couldnt put my finger on why it didnt work for me. i then read Tims comments and he hits the nail on the head.
the song is quite raw sounding ...or least wise the recording of the guitars is... it just doesnt work with the surroundings... as tim points out, it would be better suited to a studio setting featuring her backing band.
its a shame because you captured some very good footage and the singer puts in a good performance
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