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Thread: New Music Video Shot/Edited By Me JRichol - I Miss That Life Part Part 2 R&B Love F4F

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    Default New Music Video Shot/Edited By Me JRichol - I Miss That Life Part Part 2 R&B Love F4F

    I just need some feedback! i do have problems but are they noticeable?
    JRichol - I Miss That Life Part 2 R&B In Love Love Heart Break Style Music

    JRichol - I Miss That Life Part 2 R&B In Love Love Heart Break Style Music

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    If with "problems" you mean that there is no story in the visuals then yes - it's noticeable

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    I do kind of agree that there is no story here, it's just you trying hard to not look at the camera. If the climax of the video is you praying you should have some shots of a cross maybe rather than those oddly plain doors. I should say I'm not your target audience at all but the goal of a video should be to engage the Audience, this kinda just wanders. I did like a lot of the edits and the picture looks very good, I would just like more of a story.
    rock on!

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