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    Hi,

    this year I made short off film - horror/thriller from Poland with Moby's music. Audience award winner in two off festivals:
    Kocham dziwne kino w Pabianicach 2014

    Filmowe Zwierciadła w Ostrołęce 2014
    Starring: Diana Jachimowicz and Bartek Bartosz
    Screenplay/directed/cinematography/editi*ng: Tomasz Banaszczyk and Arkadiusz Seta
    Produced by QFAT

    In 2015 I plan to do next project. Please - give me Your critical jugment on editing this movie

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wPf3G9V1_jw

    It will hepl me with future work. And - I'm amator who love movies. That's all.

    Tomek.

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    Nice job. The woman who plays Ewa has amazing eyes.

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    Yes, really enjoyed it. Good idea, well executed!
    I would have liked to have seen a bit more interaction between the man and woman in the middle (but that is only my personal opinion).

    Great little movie!

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    Thank You !
    It gives me a positive energy to do another movie. You can find more info about woman character here http://www.maxmodels.pl/modelka-angelfuck.html.
    Thank You again. I believe that in Poland horror/thriller movies soon will be more popular.

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    I can't really add to what the others have said. This was a great story, well acted, directed, filmed and edited. It kept me engaged to the end. I think it would do well at BIAFF if you want to enter it into other festivals.
    http://www.theiac.org.uk/eventsnew/b...ompetition.htm
    Tim

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    Thank You for this link to IAC British International Amateur Film Competition, I didn’t know about this festival. It is grate that You like this production !!!

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    The blood on the knife in the beginning and at 07:00 looked a bit fake.
    I would have preferred more stable footage.
    Having the text messages in the screen was nice.
    The shots of preparing the food with the knife were a good intro.
    I found the intro dialogue was a bit artificial but that may be because I needed to read the subtitles and usually I watch dubbed movies.
    The surveillance cam was moving at 09:45
    Overall I am nitpicking at the film was very well done.

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    Thank You XXL Ray. I agree that blood doesn’t look good. I have to work on that , because next production has also some blood in script. And dialogues …that is my biggest problem… a good dialogue it is an art ! In second project I’m focus on that.
    And camera – it is too hard for me to be at the same time director and camera operator. I did it last time in Tough Dream. I will give up camera and focus on directing. I just hope I will find camera operator in Poland who feels horror/thriller atmosphere.

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