I made another post quite some time ago and wondered why a cut from first person view to third person view didn't work.
I got myself a new camera and used the opportunity to improve on esentially the same sequence. The footage was taken again and I even managed to add some more shots.
Furthermore I applied some tips like making more cuts and adding a "position-o-meter tm". I doubt that all of you will like the music but overall I hope I improved thanks to your feedback.