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Thread: Short film - Dead End

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    Sha Tin, Hong Kong, Hong Kong

    Default Short film - Dead End

    A short film i made this summer, it is about hk government.

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    There is some audio clipping at 0:52
    You are breaking the 180 rule at 1:55. She needs to be filmed from the other side and positioned at the right half of the frame.
    You have quite some background noise in the sequence starting at 1:50. Did you already try noise removal in post?
    I would have filmed that sequence on a tripod to underline that it's very calm.
    Little camera bump at 7:18 - cut slightly earlier.
    Some cuts are a bit harsh concerning atmosphere.
    I did not get the end. I guess it has something to do with the smartphone app that had no subtitles.

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