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    A short "Thank You" to nurses I made for the NHS using patient thank you letters. Any thoughts welcome


    Thanks
    Rob

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    Very nice. Probably a real hand writing would have been better in the beginning.

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    Good point, that would have worked better!
    Cheers
    Rob

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    It´s a beautiful idea.... It just lack a bit more of emotion to me, specially from the readers.... Maybe if you alternate what you already have with some closeups of their eyes, mouths, hands while reading.... Their seating position is not very emotional too.... And all of them saying Thank You at the ende was a bit...repetitive? Maybe another good place to alternate views with variable closeups?

    But, once again, a beautiful idea. Very good.

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    Thanks Tony, much appreciated feedback.

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