Thanks chaps! Will bring down the music and bring up the preceding dialogue. You're right and the contrast in volume is too broad. Don't think I should've watched Michael Bay's reel before cutting mine!
Thinking about the stretches. Need to really think about putting a single aspect ratio in there or at least one which is more consistent. It is an optical illusion and need to work on this.
It lacks a few elements and now I'm well again, hopefully if I can get back into the real world and get a job etc..., will shoot a couple of shorts which should rectify this. Although I shoot stuff for a few grand here and there, am still an amateur but want to fight my way up to climb the slippery pole and see if I can make films!
"80% of success is turning up" - Woody Allen