I made a video about a wooden plane makeover. The first time I tried to give it a background story. I had problems finding the balance of telling something catchy and to still document my work. So I left out sad music and interviews of people in tears
Could you maybe have a look?
All other feedback is of course also appreciated. I had some issues with my audience setup and needed to re-record some sections. That is unfortunately audible. I should have probably re-done all of it but you know ... time.