This was my first attempt at a serious drama. It can only be said that what we ended up with is nothing like the vision we had when developing it. A bit of a disappointment but I think we all came our of it with a far greater understanding of film making. Roll on the next one.
I'm don't want to influence anyone's comments so I'll avoid stating what I think is weak and/or making excuses for this, that and the other until later.
Grateful for any criticism, but I appreciate that at 15min it's a big ask (being a drama it doesn't lend itself to dipping into).
One point I will make is that there is a Postscript after the main closing credits (I should have signposted that better).