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    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p_WEQV3Byc8

    Ok, this took me a while to make, I am not too experienced in the editing department but thought I would give it a shot. feedback is welcome! Thanks.

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    Can't fault it. Plenty happening, but the name comes across clearly. Perfect length. Great co-ordination of colours and shapes (to my ntrained eyes anyway). All it needs is some equally snappy audio.
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    Crisp and straight to the point. I like it.

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    Ye its nice, but is grey really the way to go?

    Even if it is silver, it just doesn't stand out enough i think.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Springer View Post
    Ye its nice, but is grey really the way to go?

    Even if it is silver, it just doesn't stand out enough i think.
    Doesn't need to stand out. It needs to be instantly recognisable. The colours chosen don't immediately scream any other brand to me so I think they are a good choice.
    Tim

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    Interesting point about not reminding you of anyother brand. I would say it's almost the exact oposite of my personal taste but that's not a good thing or a bad thing, just my thing. Which is the point of a logo it's your thing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TimStannard View Post
    Doesn't need to stand out. It needs to be instantly recognisable. The colours chosen don't immediately scream any other brand to me so I think they are a good choice.
    Arite, cool, I take your point.

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    I like the use of 4 colours.
    But, I wonder about slowly revealing the name. Of the 5 second clip, we only get to read the full name after around 0:03.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TimStannard View Post
    Can't fault it. Plenty happening, but the name comes across clearly. Perfect length. Great co-ordination of colours and shapes (to my ntrained eyes anyway). All it needs is some equally snappy audio.
    Tim's comments are valid but may have seemed a tad academic

    i ran them through an online jive translator to bring them to the street

    "Can't fault it. Plenty happenin', but da damn dojigger comes across clearly. Slap mah fro! Perfect lengd. Great co-o'dinashun uh colours and shapes (to mah' ntrained eyes anyway). All it needs be some equally snappy audio."

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    Quote Originally Posted by zamiotana View Post
    Tim's comments are valid but may have seemed a tad academic

    i ran them through an online jive translator to bring them to the street
    ... and now in morse: -. --- .--
    Tim

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