It kept my interest right the way through well done.
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Maybe slightly too long but I felt entertained.
I thought it was entertaining as well.
Worked for me. It was a shame you felt you needed to use subtitles though. I think they were needed, but a clearer voiceover would have been better.
Hey thanks for the feedback! Yeah I agree on the voiceover because we are still not familiar with audio recording :p