So this is one of the first shorts I've done that I'm actually semi-proud of. I'd like some constructive criticism on just about everything. Narrative, editing, camera, etc etc. I would also like to hear what people thought happened. It seems to be about a 50/50 chance that people will actually understand what I intended to be going on. Not sure if that's okay or there's something wrong with the execution. I wanted to try my hand at something that didn't really spoon feed the audience. Let me know what you think and I'll answer any questions you have.