Could anyone take the time to critique this for me?
It's for a festival committee to use as a submission for grants etc, so I made it short and snappy, however I feel a bit uncomfortable with it. Maybe it's the changes in light, or the sequence?
It doesn't have to be super professional or anything, but I feel some of you may be able to suggest improvements.
It's made up of stills from film, film, and at least 3 other peoples still-shots.