Last edited by ibanezfrelon; 08-26-2013 at 03:52 AM. Reason: link not working
Nice one - I mean how could an advertisement be better. I would have maybe added some close-ups of photos to give an idea about the image quality as you are focusing a lot on emotions and not so much on the product itself (although binding it). It might even be a boost if she was given the album by her husband. A timelapse sky after the clock would maybe work well but needn't.
I think it was well shot and it communicates the message well.
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This works ever so well and I particularly like the reflection in the pendulum shot. One shot I would have replaced . . the album being stored in the bottom drawer? This signifies not looked at in years (unless this is the message?) - Top drawer/shelf signifies = admired regularly. Nice job!
My opinions are just that . . . Mine. It's not personal, but is based on my emotional and professional reaction to requested critique. If you choose to ignore constructive comments, I'll just assume you're a vanity poster and not posting to improve your filming and editing skills.
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Thanx guys for your comments and suggestions!!!