I like it, but seemed too long.... After 2 minutes everything seemed like a repetition. Kept my full attention during the first music. Then I lost it all. One question: the halo effect was added in post? In case yes, consider using it in just 20% of the shots, not all of them, as it also seemed quite repetitive. But if it´s a real lens effect, than there is nothing to do about it (except editing with shots without it?) Loved the shots taken from the kite. Gopro?? Nice sport there. Looks like they´re having real fun!
I can only echo what Tony has said. You do what you do very well but don't know when enough is enough.
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