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    Default My first film - it's about Pizza!

    Hey there!
    I made this a while ago with to co-workers/friends for a school/college project. This is my first video project, but I really enjoyed it and I plan to do more in the future. Please tell me what you think and what I could do better!

    Thank you!


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    Hi Doro,

    the music and editing style over this subject (nothing un-expected) made your piece a bit "too long". It´s not a recipe video, but lasts like one....

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    I have to agree with Tony. You've got lots of interesting ideas and shots (even if Tony says there's nothing unexpected), but you've got trapped into this idea that you need to use all of them. You don't. I suspect you could make a pretty good 1 minute video from this material.

    But for a first video, I thought this was very impressive indeed.
    Tim

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    Oh, by unexpected I meant the "how to make a pizza", but the shots can be really creative over an unexpected subject for sure!

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