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    Blimey. If it had only cost me $299-$900 per year, I'd probably still be smoking!
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    There is a very sudden ending to this video.

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    The titles were over the edges of the screen before I had a chance to read them fully.

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    A nice idea and some nice images but, in my opinion...

    The titles go wa-ay too fast and a couple of times the first/last words are cut off before they can be read.

    Also phrases like "off of" may be how you would say the phrase but don't read well. Perhaps replace with the word "from"

    Finally, it's a pity you couldn't get an actual smoker. All I kept thinking was that she was in no danger since she wasn't actually inhaling.

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    Yes, a bit difficult to read, abrupt ending..... Not sure if I like the idea, as I don´t mind people smoking (as long as they don´t smoke close to me).... There is more than enough information about how smoking is bad for you today. So.... when people decide to smoke, it´s not an uninformed decision like 30 years ago.... Here in BR the anti-smoke campaign is sooo heavy that, if you decide to smoke...you´re a hero!!!

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    I know, sorry. We are just now learning how to work our video editor !

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    Quote Originally Posted by Midnight Blue View Post
    There is a very sudden ending to this video.

    I know, sorry. We are just now learning how to work our video editor !

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rembrandt Rob View Post
    A nice idea and some nice images but, in my opinion...

    The titles go wa-ay too fast and a couple of times the first/last words are cut off before they can be read.

    Also phrases like "off of" may be how you would say the phrase but don't read well. Perhaps replace with the word "from"

    Finally, it's a pity you couldn't get an actual smoker. All I kept thinking was that she was in no danger since she wasn't actually inhaling.

    Thanks for the constructive criticism !

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