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    Would love some feedback on some of my most recent documentary/profile films.

    Hope you enjoy them.



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    Happy to provide feedback, but please respect the rules of this section: One Video Per Thread.
    This makes it a lot easier to see which comments apply to which film.
    Feel free to post the other films in a thread of their own.
    Tim

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    Nice work.

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    Very nice. He was a gift of a speaker (of course we don't know all the rubbish that you cut out, but he spoke clearly, lucidly without hesitation in the clips you used).
    A good selection of b-roll, nicely shot.
    I love these little films.
    Tim

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    OP wants some critique, I thought? - - - - For me, being critical the speaker somehow didn't sound like it was him - something about the audio - also I thought the music was approaching overdone. This may have affected the speech for me. Although as others have said a nice documentary to be proud of. Were the opening City-shots your own, or library perhaps?.

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