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    Hey
    it may start a little bit bad at start but please please watch till the end

    If you liked please rate fav and sub

    Broken Bonds - Warrior - YouTube

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    Way too long. I'd cut it down to 2 minutes. Seems like your trying to tell too much of the story. Also, I would lose all the sub-titles. The video doesn't get going until about 1:26. I like the editing, looks professional in most places.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sharkie002 View Post
    Way too long. I'd cut it down to 2 minutes. Seems like your trying to tell too much of the story. Also, I would lose all the sub-titles. The video doesn't get going until about 1:26. I like the editing, looks professional in most places.
    Yep i know it sucks till 1:26 but i tried my best

    BTW its the first time i try this kind of videos so im new to it..

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    should i cut down 2 first minutes and reupload?

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    You should wait for more feedback from the veterans on the board. I'm pretty new at this too, just started production school last month. Those were just my first impressions of your work. My idea of a trailer is shorter than 5 minutes. Give just enough to intrigue, leave em wanting more. I think you did a hell of a job with it though.

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    It looked great. But it would as it is a professionally made film.

    I'm not entirely sure what the purpose of this is. To make people go and see the real film? It's not a complete entertainment in its own right.

    I thought you sequenced it quite well, but the endless fades to black were tedious.

    However, the most anoying thing for me was the captions were littered with spelling and grammatical errors. These are perfectly forgivable if you're typing on a forum, but when you're making captions/subtitles, you have all the time in the world. If you're not confident that your spelling and grammar is perfect, get someone else to check it. It's insulting to your audience.
    Tim

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    Thank you very much sir , i really appreciate your comment

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    Quote Originally Posted by TimStannard View Post

    I'm not entirely sure what the purpose of this is. To make people go and see the real film? It's not a complete entertainment in its own right.
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    Its a Trailer. Just a really long one.


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