I've just finished my first draft of this music video. I've worked really hard on it and I'm really proud of it, but I'm a bit frustrated that the band have told me to keep working on it. This was never meant to be the final cut, but I was sort of hoping it would just need a little tweaking from here.
Anyway, I could really do with some advice as to how to improve things. One of the band have told me they don't like the flickers of colour. He also said he doesn't like the shot of the mask flicking on and off him, (a shot that I really like).