Hi guys, can anyone who has the time, and would like to, please take a look at my latest muci video work. I can't help but think it can be bettered.
It is not finished but I just wanted to get opinions on what could be done to improve it. Please let me know what you get from the subtle elemtns of story being revealed
Please ignore the black screen between 1.01 - 1.05, I am missing a shot that will be included into that part of the video.
Thanks in advance for any helpful feedback.
LIFE_video - YouTube