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    I liked this. Just one shot at 1:32 where you should have framed the guy at the other side of the centre line.

    Everything else is great and you managed to keep it to 2 mins.

    Well done.

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    few more close ups would have been good, and maybe not so rigid cuts to the beat.

    nice piece
    'No longer are the pleasures of Home Movie Making limited to those with ample funds. Now the man and woman of moderate means can join the sport'..... Kodak catalogue 1933

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    Being picky 0:41 looked too much like a jump cut for comfort. 0:50 camera starts to zoom as you cut.
    I like the composition at 1:32. Having the subject on the "wrong" side of the centre line adds a feeling of separation/lonliness.

    Nice job.
    Tim

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    Thanks thanks thanks

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    Perfect choice of music, instead of a guy wandering around a graveyard we had senses of anticipation, but I'm not sure about the context of that.

    You made film making look easy here, inspiring.

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