Some beautiful shots in here mb, and for that reason I don't understand why you chose the shot you opened with. Because of its lack of movement I was wondering if this was to be a slide show.
Not keen on the vignette, it's a bit heavy and you can see the inner circle on the pannin g shots. Unless its a static shot subtle vignette is the only way to go IMO.
A little too long for me.... 3 minutes would have been preferable with this kind of thing.
Sorry for being heavy but you did ask
Last edited by enc; 01-27-2013 at 11:07 AM.
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