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Thread: First episode of my web series. Feedback appreciated.

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    Default First episode of my web series. Feedback appreciated.

    Hey people, here's the first episode of my web series:



    If you don't like it, please don't just hit the dislike button and go about your day, I'd like some constructive criticism. Other than that, hope you enjoy. Looking forward to hearing what you think.

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    For some reason I was unable to play the video. Are others having this problem???

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    Quote Originally Posted by zamiotana View Post
    For some reason I was unable to play the video. Are others having this problem???

    Was it just not loading?
    Last edited by davidbouhs; 09-26-2012 at 02:28 PM.

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    not loading -- and no progress indicator -- both IE and Chrome

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    Quote Originally Posted by zamiotana View Post
    not loading -- and no progress indicator -- both IE and Chrome
    And other videos load? That's strange, it's been fine for all my computers and browsers, friends too. Works fine at my work too as well as my iphone, both 3G and wifi. Problem must be on your end.

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    Worked OK For me. Only critic was the side to side camera movement at the beginning in the gun scene, found it distracting. Other wise good job Well Done.

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    Quote Originally Posted by CaptionWorld View Post
    Worked OK For me. Only critic was the side to side camera movement at the beginning in the gun scene, found it distracting. Other wise good job Well Done.
    The entire gun scene or just the first few shots?

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    very mysterious -- I just tried it on my wife's iPhone with the same result -- I'll try it at the office next and see

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    The entire gun scene or just the first few shots?

    Yes. the whole gun scene. Just played it again to confirm, the camera operator is continually moving side to side. I know the camera replicates someone looking on, so you would expect only slight movement. But this is noticeably excessive. Oh and the explosion scene at the end breaks up to black segments. Or was it supposed to? Nice touch to the ending though.

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    Here is my opinion.
    I think the audio requires some adjustment. It sounds boomy.
    IMHO, at 1:21, whilst the masked man shoots the floor, the young man had plenty of time to shoot him. He is only a few feet away from him!
    The young man's acting was a little thin, I was hoping he would get shot around 1:21.
    I did not like some of the script. The F word did not make the scene any more dramatic; and gave the impression that the actors were speaking their lines ad lib.
    However, I was surprised at the ending; and even felt mildly interested to see the next episode. But, I would not see anymore if the next episode was so slow.

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