Whilst you may have wanted the effect; there is alot of blotchy looking bits of floor. For example, bottom left of frame at 0:21. Was that a result of some excessive keying or filtering?
I'm interested to know exactly what your role was in the making of this. I think the tong in cheek visuals fitted the the tong in cheek lyrics.
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I think the lyisist needs to learn the past tense of "sh*t".
Editing seemed fine. The miming was atrocious. Whenever lip syncing, the singers should actually sing if it's to seem at all real.