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    Default Welcome To Marriage - Webisode 1

    Another video my wife and I made in which will hopefully be a series of webisodes.

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    The material is not as strong as the trial run.
    The first and last scenes were more schoolboy humour than anything. The middle scene was better (more like observational humour) although we've all seen the same gag several times before.
    I guess I don't need to mentio the poor framing of the first shot (chopping off tops of heads).
    I sugget you avoid using expletives unless necessary to the humour. If one person takes offense, it's reduced your potential audience by one ... see where I'm going?

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