Edit: Final draft video
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I've been cooking this idea up for the better part of 2 years and finally I managed to get it filmed. Length is currently 3:45 and ideally I'd like to see it down to 3 minutes but have a few questions for you:
1: Does it play acceptably at its current length? / Would it be improved at a reduced length?
2: Obvious sections to possibly cut are 0:38-0:52, the second interview piece to camera. Is this funny? Is it worth keeping? And 1:35-2:05 the microfilm dialogue, this could be reduced in length. Also a few seconds chopped off the credits.
3: I have yet to complete basic colour correction and sign off the audio mix, but are there any stand out issues for you?
I'd really appreciate feedback on this one, I want it to be the best it can be.