I really think you shpould have waited until you had something to show. At the moment you are trying to get people ton invest in something where they are not going to make a return, you have not track record and not even a hint of what you might be capable of.
I have, once, contributed a very small amount of money via IndieGoGo towards a film for no reason other than the feel good feeling of helping make something happen. However, the film maker had made several films I has been impressed with and was clearly progressing.
What you're basically saying here is "please can i have some money to make films" with film that makes anyone think you don't really have a clue about how to make films (poor composition, light, sound etc). It simply doesn't sell you. And you really need to work hard to sell the concept - take a look at
this posted by a man who's done it.
I'm not saying you shouldn't try to raise money this way, but just that your marketing is all wrong.
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