Newbie web video editor need advice and help

[MaitreGeeks]

hi, I'am alex i start editing a web episode for a friend of mine since 1 month, the 1st episode was really bad and boring but i tried my best on the number #2
this is the link if you want givee your advice : Dailymotion - Watch, publish, share videos


Also for the moment my role is :
scene writer
realisator
editor
subtitles editor ....

and you are interresting by helping me , i'm looking a a script writer, voice hover, and traductor voice hover

thanks

[MaitreGeeks]

someone can help me ?

[TimAndrews]

I watched about 4 mins of the clip. I have no idea what it was about, what you were attempting to show, how the song was related to anything, what was the purpose of the adult stuff, what's being sold, what/who/when/why etc etc. What kind of voice is required? And, I have to ask what is a "traductor voice hover"?