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    Hello,

    I worked on the opening titles for my new film and I was hoping to get some feedback from you guys before I get too much further.



    Zam

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    You seem to have cut off the dialogue when the Foley comes in at around 30 secs. The over all tone of the voice seems to lack a lot of bottom end (low frequencies), was that done deliberately to make it sound like it was said over a phone ?

    I like the general idea.

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    Promblem is, Zam, I'm always looking for the joke! I agree with midnight - there's something wrong with the crossover of the sounds. If you don't want to fade in the foley, move the point where it starts. At present it feels like it's a bad edit (harsh cut) between a voiceover and ambient sound. The screech & rapid sit up ined worked really well, I thought.
    Tim

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    Thanks guys!

    I originally recorded the narration using a Rode Video Mic but the result had too much low end and very little high-end for my liking. I then recorded it with the onboard microphones in my Olympus voice recorder, which didn't give me any low end at all (that's what I used in the video I uploaded). I have a few more microphones to try out but I also have access to a number of decent microphones from my video club so I may go that route.

    I didn't fade in the "submerged" sound effect so I'll fix that too.

    As far as the story, I am going to try for a (hopefully brilliant) combination of snappy one-liners and unspeakable horror.

    Zam

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