It looked good to me. What area where you considering feedback about?
I see a great example of using a gopro, two panels with information, and a strange red ring (which I could not imagine what it was).
I very much liked the fast changing 'Information' panel. The immediate "effect" was that I supposed you had actually linked the craft's height etc to visible values in the shot. But seconds later, I wondered what the values were representing. But the trick worked briefly on me, so I was happy.
I am not sure how you set AE to show you the fast changing values. There are, I know, 100 ways to do it; but I am curious whether your were considering using real life values from external sources, such as motion tracking or digital records from other instruments. I fancy seeing a clip with a HUD overlay, showing the aircraft's roll/pitch/yaw. Some of that data could be provided from AE's Tracking facility.