Nicely filmed and put together. As you said it's a shame about having to mask out the Kleenex, As it is now, it looks like she put down some naked pictures of her self or is that just my dirty mind.
As it's so good I'm going to be extra critical. The opening shot should have been on a tripod. For me that type of shot can't be done hand held. The shot at around 25 seconds could have done with some Foley sound of foot steps as the ambient didn't pick the real ones up enough. Also because it's hand held you didn't get the shot square it's slightly tilted this becomes more prominent because there are a lot of horizontal line to judge it from the stairs. This problem occurs again at around 42 seconds of the girl in the library but this time there are vertical shelves to show the outness. Again at 55 seconds look at the elevator doors they are not true verticals. Are we beginning to see a patten.
It was mostly filmed very well with POVs, walking into shot different angles etc... Nice fitting music. AND as I said first a very sweet little story.