I thought the intro sequence was overlong, but credit to you for introducing the people and giving it a natural beginning. I guess you couldn't think of a natural end and so went for the "faulty transmission" otion. This wasn't out of keeping with the editing/music so that's fine (if a bit of a cop=out). Your ident (2:32) is unreadable!
But overall I thought this was a reasonable job. Nicely edited with excellent attention to matching the cuts and clips to the music. A few of the shots were not perfect, but what this really brought home to me was one way to take this to a higher level is a shallower depth of field. Throughout, the background is as crisp as the talent and it would be really nice to separate them more. But, of course, that takes equipment and money. So, given what you've got, I'd give it 3/5.
If you shortened it by tightening the intro and loosing all the shots that aren't really good I'd give it 4 (and 4.5 for the editing). Well done.