No I'm not saying it's not bad for a beginner as I know your not a beginner, I'm saying it's nicely shot and edited what ever the experience level. BUT as the piece is called "Emotion", for me it lacks emotion a piece called emotion should have. If you just called it "random people in the street" that would be a more fitting title.
I'm with midnight on that one. technically, it looks great, but there is no message, no story, those are just good looking shots put together with a calm music. I do not understand what the intention was, what the message is or, for that matter, where the emotions were. Which leads me to my question: what were the purpose of this vid? (maybe it'll help me understand) what's the context?