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Thread: Bloody Shame: Short Comedy Film

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    Default Bloody Shame: Short Comedy Film

    Synopsis: A blood soaked room mate seeks assistance when he has an accident.


    Year of production : 2011
    Genre: Comedy
    Cast: Ant Richardson, Callum Thomson,
    Director: Ant Richardson, Callum Thomson, Patrick Shelton
    DP: Patrick Shelton
    Writer: Callum Thomson
    Music: freeSFX.co.uk - Download Free Sound Effects





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    Check out our blog to find out more information on the kit we used and our general working process

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    Well done, I didn't the gag coming.

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    Good script and great deadpan delivery of an absurd story.

    Nice opening with the glidetrack shot then the pull focus.
    Then some fairly "ordinary" shot/reverse shot stuff whilst you setup the gag
    Then a great mix of varied action shots with some fast cut editing
    Then back to the "ordinary" shot/reverse shot for the delivery of the punch-line.

    It worked well, but the icing on the cake for me would be to create some visual interest at the end (we have it at the beginning then the middle - the classic "W" shape requires it at the end as well). I haven't a suggestion to make though so I'm not really being very helpful, ami I.
    Tim

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    I think Tim wants to see a shot of a plastic dog turd.

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    Haha, yeah thanks Tim I know what you mean. I'll tell the DP to not be so boring next time :P

    I'm glad you guys got a chuckle out of it.

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    Very good. Precise and paced well to keep us interested. You two work well together I would like to see you put the effort into something a bit longer tbh. Have you anything in the pipeline?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Midnight Blue View Post
    Well done, I didn't the gag coming.
    Did you see the subliminal?

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    What do you guys use to record your audio ?

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    I like it, well filmed and good acting. The gag is a bit lazy but for a start, you guys are doing great.

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    I'm being a bit thick here - what was the significance of the whisk?
    Tim

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