I think the music is good but it's to loud in the mix with the interviews. I think you guys managed to capture the flavour of the day which is I suppose what the intention was so you achieved your goal. I liked the display shots and thought you cut them together well and I liked that you put in information about each of the displays as they happen. Those Blade lads are nutters. Who did the in flight shots on the RAF King Air? I afraid there is a bit of a fail with the out of focus shot at 9:19 but never mind as the rest of the piece is really good.
Well done chaps.