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    Hi everyone,
    This is my first attempt at creating a short comedy clip for a film competition. My dream is to one day go to Hollywood - as stupid as it sounds, considering I'm studying economics atm. Would appreciate any feedback and I hope you guys enjoy it.

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    Initial comments.

    All the shots are from (virtually) the same angle and the same distance with static people. No matter how good the script is (and it certainly didn't grab me) people will turn off very soon.

    The camera is not set up level on the tripod - even worse it's set at different angles of "unlevelness".

    The sound is readful, we can hear loads of room noise (reverb). You need to get a mic right up close to eliminate that - not an onboard camera mic.

    You can continue to pick up tips here, but you need to adress these very basic issues first. I wouldn't jack in the economics just yet.
    Tim

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    I agree with everything Tim has said but without the typos.

    Also the post effects don't look very good. They distract from the piece rather than enhance it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Midnight Blue View Post
    I agree with everything Tim has said but without the typos.
    My favourite quote of the month
    And I have such an obvious one to come back at you with. Just awaiting the opportunity
    Tim

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    I'm waiting with great antic...







    .....ipation.

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