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    Cool ---DETECTION--- Thriller/Neo Noir Short Film (2 Minutes)

    We made this movie over the course of a couple of days for our A-S Film Studies coursework. We hope you enjoy!

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GijUsmKz_vU
    DETECTION

    Detective Michael J Henderson reflects on his latest case.

    Directed by Callum Woodbridge

    Starring:


    Jack Robinson
    Harry Groom
    Tanner Hatley

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    Please remix the audio. I found it hard to understand what the narrator was saying. It spoilt what looked like a good piece.

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    I didn't know what Midnight was on about. It all sounded fine to me. Then we got to 1:25...
    But other than that it looked quite good. I thought some of the jump cuts didn't work as well as they might - the shots either side of the cut were just too similar, making it look like an error rather than a stylised compression of time. But it was good clean filming with a good choice of shots used to slowly reveal the story during the course of the film. Some nice tension/release.
    Last edited by TimStannard; 11-19-2011 at 10:26 AM.
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    I didn't know what Midnight was on about. It all sounded fine to me. Then we got to 1:25...
    Exactly. It's a real shame as the video is very good other than that issue.

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