I'm in a debate with my friend. Basically, we're both in a clan and we're making youtube videos for it. After many many goes and constant annoyance and scrutiny of my clips by him, I've decided to let you decide the flaws of the video.
All you need to do is watch the video and tell me the flaws of it (if any), the good bits (if any) and your opinion about it and also anything else you wanna say about it. improvements and what not. Thanks!