Beginner Kinetic Typography

[Dahnny012]

Heres a Kinetic typography i made , please comment and criticize i want to get better !

[Midnight Blue]

I'm always impressed by this sort of thing. I think you've made a great job of it. There were a couple of work that were hard to read because they were dark on a dark background but most of it was great.

Well done.

[Dahnny012]

thank you very much , i would agree with you on the parts being dark , what was i thinking putting black text on a dark background :P

[ypatelproductions]

If you guys don't mind, would you also look at my typography. I consider myself intermediate - still have a long way to go. But, please, comment/criticize. Anything will be beneficial.

[NFox]

They are both very impressive, enjoyed them both!

[Dahnny012]

Hello guys , I created a new credits video ,which i found was really cool



And a unfinished physics video



And a video for my Gf ,

[TimStannard]

Stoppit Stoppit Stoppit!
The whole point is ONE VIDEO PER THREAD so we all know which video we're talking about!
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