I am posting this link here, mainly in thanks for the assistance received in these Forums regarding the length and placement of credits. However, I am interested in feedback in any cinemagraphic (i.e. ignoring that it is only an animation - not made with a real camera) aspects of the video. Get those knives out!
The intended audience are myself, friends and our relatives, so I really won't get upset if you all hate it. But, like all Forum posters; I am keen to do better next time. Thank you.