Flatmates - Friendships - Short Comedy

[jonnywalks]

Hi All,

From feedback this is my fourth attempt at the Flatmates comedy. Any feedback or comments most welcome!



Regards, Jonny

[Midnight Blue]

I don't know if Cathy has a loud voice but I did detect a lot of peaking form her dialogue. I noticed there were no credits for a sound man.

Apart from that it was great.

[TimStannard]

I don't recall seeing this one before, but I know the others you've posted were all finished (I saw them on your channe) before we first raised the issue of your sound. I'm guessing this is something you have subsequently addressed.
It was well acted and filmed, but I didn't find the content as "mature" in this one as the others. Sorry.
But that hasn't put me off the series.

[jonnywalks]

Thanks for the feedback Tim! Each episode is going for a different kind of comedy, it's all for fun. I know this isn't how you'd normally do a series, but I like trying out different styles. Let me know how you go with the others!

Jonny