I like that music track Alan. What is it ?
Midnight Blue Productions M.M.Inst.V.
This was rather different from most of what we get to see here in that it was reasonably competent without being highly polished/arty. (We tend to get really top notch posted as examples, or really rather poor). I'd be happy, though not deleriously so, if it was my wedding.
I liked the beginning with the vignettings and the titles, but spotted the vignettes extended beyond the top of the images resulting in a hard line at the top of each.
There are a number of shots I would't have used (eg groom fiddling with his waistecoat button tilting up and zoom and some others showing re-framing) and there were one or two cuts I'd have done differently (eg 37 seconds action moving right to left cut to action moving left to right), but not enough to complain about - indeed much of this is personal taste. To be honest, I thought the composite around 2:22 was a bit of a mess - lots of people half seen milling around. And I thought the caption "The Photographs" was rather pointless.
Too harsh? Depends on what basis you made the film.