Sketch Comedy - Loose Lunch

[planetrain82]

Please check out my first comedy video, Loose Lunch. Shot on HVX200, edited in FCP. Thank you!

YouTube - ‪Loose Lunch‬‏

[TimStannard]

Well, it certainly gave me a smirk, though I did think it should have ended after the initial punchline & credits. The postscript, whilst amusing enough, rather took away from the gag.
I thought the shots looked lovely, but the audio was spoiled in the London and Beverly hills scenes by far too much background noise. Don't get me wrong, I like a bit of ambient, but ther was just too much wind noise/rusling of trees not really sure what.

[planetrain82]

Well, it certainly gave me a smirk, though I did think it should have ended after the initial punchline & credits. The postscript, whilst amusing enough, rather took away from the gag.
I thought the shots looked lovely, but the audio was spoiled in the London and Beverly hills scenes by far too much background noise. Don't get me wrong, I like a bit of ambient, but ther was just too much wind noise/rusling of trees not really sure what.

Thank you for the feedback, will definitely be helpful in future videos! I'll have to spend some more time on audio in post. Sound definitely makes a big difference!

[TimStannard]

I'll have to spend some more time on audio in post.

Blimey, you added it? I thought it was captured on the dialogue track.

[planetrain]

Blimey, you added it? I thought it was captured on the dialogue track.

It was captured on the dialogue track, but I may have been able to clean it up in Pro Tools or something. I boom with a Sennheiser MKH416, that thing is amazing, but unfortunately it picked up the water fountains in the background in both those shots.

[rollingstock]

have to say just the right duration there, a few more seconds and my attention span would have failed me

[Midnight Blue]

Nicely shot. I didn't think the sound was too bad but I listened on a crappy lap top.

I think there could have been a better punch line but it was mildly amusing. Nice choice of locations.