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    Default Transport

    Hi,
    I am new to the forum,
    I wanted to share my recent short film titled Transport,
    It is an experimental look at night-time commute.



    Any feedback is much appreciated.
    L

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    It started well. I thought this might be interesting. Blurry shots, time laps, good sound-scape, even an interesting split screen. Then half way through you put in the opening title ? Then you did a focus pull at around 2:10 but missed. Not sure about the Dutch tilt on the very long shot @ 2:55 but I suppose it is an artistic piece.

    Even with the faults, I still liked it.

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    Thanks, yeah I am not so sure about the title in the middle anymore, but It is something to watch out for in the next one.
    L

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    very nice worck

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