I have definitely seen an improvement technically with your videos over time. While you are not "there" yet this video shows, to me, you have taken some things on board that have been suggested to you from these forums, like working on your personal performances, even though I saw a few embarrassed smirking going on at the back. I also like that you tried some original stuff like the camera movement, not sure I like it but I was pleased to see you expanding your creative ideas. I think it's important to try new things or you just become part of the wall paper of similar videos out there.
I'm looking forward to the strong narrative of the next video.